Daily Post Discover Challenge: Opening Line

Jamie has taken up the Discover Challenge this week.

The theme is: Opening Line

It was the first time, and it wouldn’t be the last.

The shark’s teeth embraced the fish once.

 Then again,

 and again

 and again

 and again.

 Ravenous, he carried on

 ripping the fish apart.

 When finished he

 swam off in to the distance.

 Jamie M

(Image credit en.wikipedia.org)






One Comment Add yours

  1. Mrs Bailey says:

    Wow Jamie, what a great poem! You’ve used some really effective vocabulary.


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