Jamie has taken up the Discover Challenge this week.
The theme is: Opening Line
It was the first time, and it wouldn’t be the last.
The shark’s teeth embraced the fish once.
Then again,
and again
and again
and again.
Ravenous, he carried on
ripping the fish apart.
When finished he
swam off in to the distance.
Jamie M
(Image credit en.wikipedia.org)
Wow Jamie, what a great poem! You’ve used some really effective vocabulary.
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